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Normally, I’m not in the habit of wasting my time and energy disparaging things I could easily ignore. But sometimes, it’s not that simple. And when attention gives way to detached (unbiased) observation, criticism may prove constructive — or even highly instructive.

Appearances can be deceiving. And sometimes they are deadly.

The Housemaid (2022)

Intrigued by the phenomenon surrounding Freida McFadden, who, in just a few years, has become the world’s best-selling thriller author, I took a closer look at the works of the “Taylor Swift of the literary world”, as some like to call her, “where extreme mediocrity is rewarded time and time again” (sic). However, despite her phenomenal commercial success and devoted fanbase (the ‘McFans’ of the TikTok generation), Freida McFadden is far from winning universal approval, and her meteoric rise has been marked by controversy.

So what is she criticised for? On the one hand, she's been accused of plagiarism on multiple occasions, although no formal evidence has ever been produced. On the other hand, her overly impersonal and simplistic style, and her hastily written, poorly edited books, are a source of irritation. Her fast-paced publishing schedule, combined with her medical career (as a brain injury specialist) and her avoidance of the media, has even fuelled rumours that she may be using artificial intelligence in her writing process.

I do love him. So much. But I don’t trust him.

The Tenant (2025)

According to her detractors, Freida McFadden is the queen of fast reads, i.e. “literary snacks to consume like fast food, literally and figuratively”. It turns out that this criticism is far from unfounded. Given that unlike many who form opinions based on hearsay I only rely on direct experience, I must confess that I literally wolfed down several of her novels in a matter of days. 

Actually, I didn’t read them: I listened to them. Over breakfast. And late into the night. A wise decision. For good voice actors can always make it sound better. But that’s not really what literature is meant for in the first place. Also, just listening tends to bypass critical analysis. Our minds don’t filter information in the same way as they do when we’re reading. It’s uploaded directly into our subconscious. While this can be helpful if we’re actively processing the information, it’s dangerous when we’re in a passive mode. Fortunately, I’m in constant vigilance mode now.

How to Make Literary Big Macs

So what makes these thrillers so addictive? The thing is, Freida McFadden doesn’t tell stories. She sets up emotional loops. And if we’re hooked, it’s not because they’re good. It’s because they’re astral.

It is a formulaic, industrialised template with the same pace and structure from one book to the next, using a database of interchangeable characters, situations and tropes. And as systematic as this formula may be, it does work. 

Multi-perspective novels using two (or sometimes three) points of view, structured around a three-act narrative arc, with very short chapters that always end on (often clickbait-style) cliffhangers designed to recapture the reader’s attention and keep them on their toes — a narrative dopamine rush that the astral is particularly fond of.

A triangle of vacuous, ultra-stereotypical generic characters, all within a precisely targeted age group; impossibly handsome, flawless men, always paired with women who are in a league of their own (sic); a first-person narrative in the present tense, allowing for immediate and effortless identification.

Mystery Man is hot, to say the least. He has thick black hair and coal-black eyes, with a level of intensity that sends yet another lightning bolt through me. His strong jaw makes him seem utterly in control and confident. His face has that pleasing textbook symmetry. He’s wearing a black T-shirt that shows off his lean build and makes his dark hair and eyes seem even more intense.

The Boyfriend (2024)

The grotesque naivety of the protagonists (often women, but not always), which makes them completely oblivious to the massive red flags, is on a par with the worst B-movie plots. It’s a gross misdirection ploy designed to justify the far-fetched final twists that you never see coming. 

At least, as long as you haven't read more than one novel. And also provided you don't pay too much attention to the blatantly misleading clues, which are often gratuitous and never explained. The author is banking on the reader's short attention span, assuming they just want to go with the flow without thinking too hard. To hell with the inconsistencies, as long as the adrenaline's pumping!

There is never any catharsis. Nothing gets morally resolved. And that opens up a frequency hole in the psychic field. The reader is left in a state of emotional limbo. Hence the addictiveness. And most people won't even realise it. 

All of Them Psychos

Identity theft and parenticide are recurring themes in Freida McFadden’s books. But the most disturbing aspect is undoubtedly the moral ambiguity of all her characters, which tends to normalise borderline personality disorder and manipulation as the standard way of relating to others. 

I am so lucky. I have a beautiful house, a fulfilling career, and a husband who is kind and mild-mannered and incredibly handsome. And as Nate pulls the car onto the road and starts driving in the direction of the school, all I can think to myself is that I hope a truck blows through a stop sign, plows into the Honda, and kills us both instantly.

The Teacher (2024)

Her role reversals blur the clear distinction between predator and prey. Since everyone is ‘a bit twisted’, no one really is. Ultimately, this dilutes the concept of predation. And trivialises psychopathy.

In 1833, Dr. James Prichard formulated an early version of what we now call psychopathy. He called it ‘moral insanity’. People diagnosed with moral insanity were thought to make bad moral judgments but had no defects in their intelligence or mental health. Psychopaths, too, are often clever and sane and are more likely to do things that are widely considered to be immoral.” (Source)

And contrary to popular belief, psychopaths are actually the ones who experience the strongest emotions (and are therefore a major source of fuel for the matrix). 

These people generally have very high levels of frustration, internal anger and intense disgust, which drive them to behave in an aberrant manner,” explains Iso V. Sinclair. “They get a certain thrill from tormenting others. A psychopath becomes one as a result of multiple traumas, and their emotions are so intense that they dissociate and seek revenge. This reaction can be scientifically explained by a lack of mirror neurons, which, due to repressed emotions (often dating back to childhood), leads to a total lack of empathy.

Read as You Are

Let’s take off our rose-coloured glasses: this simulation is a world of psychopaths and predators. Freida McFadden is simply pointing this out to us. And paradoxically, people keep coming back for more because they’re unaware of the source of their needs and desires, which, like their thoughts, come from outside themselves.

I believe that any human being is capable of terrible things if you push them hard enough.

Never Lie (2022)

Fiction, then, is not the problem. The problem is passive consumption. Consumed on autopilot, it becomes a form of mind-altering substance. Consumed with clear-eyed awareness, it becomes a mirror of astral mechanisms. 

Notes et références

  • ^ A hint at McDonald's slogan “Come as you are”.

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The Anatomy of Conflict: A Feast for the Astral

Conflict is never an accident in communication. It's an energy command.

Within the matrix, every tension, every raised voice, and every grudge is a frequency programmed to fuel the invisible planes. 

Nothing is left to chance: everything is planned, executed and digested according to an agenda that you don't grasp.

The astral creates nothing; it exploits your vulnerabilities. It scans your traumatic memories to plant a trigger thought: 

“He doesn’t respect me.”
“She’s provoking me.”

It’s not your own thought; it’s bait. The Architects of Sleep often lay the groundwork days in advance, letting small, invisible frustrations build up to overwhelm your nervous system. The final conflict is nothing more than the ignition of a fuse that’s already long.

As soon as you take the bait, the script kicks in. The aim is to polarise. Whether you are right or wrong is of no consequence to the matrix; all that matters is the friction. 

The massive electrical discharge that courses through your carbon-based body during an argument is ‘loosh’: an energetic nectar that astral predators feed on. 

A family meal that ends in raised voices is, on a vibrational level, a feast for the invisible realm.

The conflict does not end when the voices fall silent. This is where the algorithmic rumination begins. Your mind replays the scene on a loop, inventing responses, analysing faults. This ‘replay’ keeps the wound open so that the energy continues to flow, drop by drop, for hours on end.

The emotion is encoded in your cells. It becomes a flag. The astral plane programmes it so that, the next time a conflict arises, you don’t just react in the moment, but with the accumulated emotional charge of all your unresolved past experiences.

The Architect’s Strategy: Hacking the Script

The astral plans your emotional breakdowns just as an engineer anticipates stress points on a car. To break the cycle, you must go cold.

When tension rises, realise that you're being ‘plugged in’. Observe the emotional surge as if it were simply an electrical signal, without validating it.

Refuse the digestion: as soon as the scene starts replaying on a loop in your head, cut off the signal. Don’t give the astral a single second of ‘available brain time’ to can it.

Maintain sovereign neutrality: peace is not a moral emotion. It is a technical decision to protect your energy. Conflict is a harvest. The aftermath of conflict is a form of canning. Be neither one nor the other. Become the sovereign observer of your neural network.

It is not a matter of being a ‘passive victim’ or submitting. It's about changing the nature of your energy.

1. Emotional Anger (The Trap) 

If you react from your ‘identity’ (your ego), you’re playing the astral game. Your anger then becomes a chaotic, heated and reactive frequency. 

Even if you are ‘right’ on a human level, you're releasing loosh from every pore. Are you showing them how ‘unshakeable’ you are by shouting? To them, it’s like an orchestra playing louder: it’s simply more music to feed on.

2. Vibrational Anger (Mastery) 

True identity does not need to ‘stand its ground’: it simply IS. The difference lies in the temperature of the energy.

Reaction is hot: it burns your own system.
Assertion is cold: it is laser-like power.

Expressing yourself does not mean losing your temper. You can say ‘Stop’ or ‘That’s it’ with such authority that the other person (and the entity behind them) will feel a concrete wall. This is not anger; it is pure willpower. In that moment, you are unshakeable.

3. The Identity Test 

The opportunity to show that you are sovereign lies not in the loudness of your voice, but in your ability to remain unprovoked. If the astral realm still manages to make you ‘fly off the handle’, it is because it still holds the remote control to your neural network.

True identity is when you decide the timing, form and intensity of your response, without your ‘memories’ or ‘wounds’ dictating your behaviour.

Standing up to the astral means refusing to give it the show.

Original text by ÉLÉHA translated from French by EY@EL
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Self-Mockery: A Virus Disguised as Humour

Don't speak negatively about yourself, even as a joke. Your body doesn't know the difference. Words are energy and they cast spells, that's why it's called spelling.

Bruce Lee.

I’m such an idiot!
I’m such a screw-up!
Just my usual bad luck!

We laugh, thinking we’re easing the atmosphere, that we're being humble. The Operator is aware that this is a major security flaw. It is, on a frequency level, a common act of self-sabotage. 

Your basic operating system processes input literally. It doesn't have a ‘humour’ module installed. When you say “I’m an idiot” to make people laugh, your system records it as a degradation command.

You’ve just typed the following line of code: 

SET_USER_STATUS = IDIOT

The system carries out the command. The simulation adjusts accordingly. 

Speaking ill of oneself, even as a joke, is validating the matrix script. If you laugh at your ‘bad luck’, you’re confirming that you accept this role. You’re allowing the simulation to keep sending you shitty events because, technically, you’ve just declared that this is who you are.

Self-mockery is a stance of astral submission. The Operator, on the other hand, practises Vibrational Authority. Instead of belittling yourself in order to be ‘loved’ or ‘accepted’ by the group, you ought to maintain your voltage.

Vibrational Authority is not arrogance (which is an ego-driven emotion); it is the clear recognition of your technical worth.

Arrogance says: "I am the best." (need for comparison).

Vibrational Authority says: "My terminal is fully functional. I am in control of my space." (statement of fact)

The Operator's Protocol: Verbal Discipline

Your words are your control interface. You don’t mess around with the controls of a nuclear reactor; likewise, you don’t mess around with the words that define you.

If you don’t want this to become your physical reality, don’t let it come out of your mouth, even with a smile. If a demeaning “joke” slips out, rectify it immediately with a command of sovereignty:

I cancel this instruction. I strip these words of any reality. I hereby restore my vibrational authority here and now.

The Operator’s humour focuses on the absurdity of the setting, never on the quality of their own system.

Original text by ÉLÉHA translated from French by EY@EL
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Read the Room

Bad guy on the run,
Dancing with the enemy,
But it doesn't really make a difference
Cause there's nowhere to run,
Yeah, there's nowhere to hide.
This is destiny calling.
You shine like a star, it's a guarantee,
I would run for the hills if you run with me.

Read the room...
Read the room...
Read the room... 

They say that life is full of choices
For those who make all the noises,
But it doesn't really make a difference
Cause when you take to the street,
As they turn up the heat,
You know the plan is working.
We're only one step away from catastrophe.
I would run for the hills if you run with me. 

Read the room...
Read the room...
Read the room...

Cause there's nowhere to run
And there's nowhere to hide.
This is destiny calling.
You shine like a star, it's a guarantee,
I will run for the hills if you run with me.

The world it is weeping,
Complying will cost me. 

Read the room...
Read the room...
Read the room...
Read the room...
Read the room...
Read the room...
Read the room...

Cause there's nowhere to run,
There's nowhere to hide.
This is destiny calling.
You shine like a star, it's a guarantee,
I will run for the hills if you run with me.

Original text by GORDON MCNEIL

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Once Upon a Broken Heart

In 2025, a Page Odyssey, I introduced you to the Caraval three-book series released in 2017 by American author Stephanie Garber. Now I'd like to review a follow-up trilogy by the same author, which I found equally enjoyable. Published in 2021, Once Upon a Broken Heart is set in the same fantasy world but focuses on the fate of a new protagonist, a hopeless romantic whose discernment is inversely proportional to her exaggerated saviour complex — something that smacks more of compulsive recklessness than conscious heroism, and seems to make her a magnet for every psychopath on earth. Among them is the very ‘borderline’ Jacks, also known as the Prince of Hearts, previously featured in the last two volumes of Caraval, who becomes the captivating central figure of the series.

When Fairy Tales Go Sour

While the previous story ended on a note of triumph and resolution, this one begins on a decidedly darker, more ambiguous note. Stephanie Garber explains that she actually wanted to tell a fairy tale with murder added to it: “I thought it would be fun to have a girl solve a murder while falling for someone she suspected might actually be responsible for the murder,” she says

Evangeline Fox is a bit like Cinderella: an orphan, bullied by a greedy stepmother, and secretly envied by her stepsister. Almost caricaturally naive, she maintains an unquestioning belief in the existence of soulmates, twin flames, and other persistent, deceptive myths such as Everlasting Love. Hence her devastation when, overnight, she finds out that despite being deeply in love with her, her sweetheart is about to marry her stepsister. 

Evangeline had a gift when it came to believing in things that others considered myths—like the immortal Fates. She opened the metal grate. The door itself didn’t have a handle, forcing her to wedge her fingers into the tiny space between its jagged edge and the dirty stone wall. The door pinched her fingers, drawing a drop of blood, and she swore she heard its splintered voice say, Do you know what you’re about to step into? Nothing but heartbreak will come from this. But Evangeline’s heart was already broken. And she understood the risks she was taking. She knew the rules for visiting Fated churches.

In desperation, she bargains with the charismatic Prince of Hearts to stop the wedding. But as the saying goes, “Be careful what you wish for”. As soon as her wish is granted, she immediately regrets it. Fortunately, nothing is ever set in stone forever — not even her. Except that nothing ever comes for free either, and her second chance granted for a fresh start quickly turns out to be a bittersweet, poisoned gift. 

Just like the deadly kiss of Jacks the Cursed, whose heart has stopped beating, as revealed in Caraval. Even though the broken heart in the title officially refers to Evangeline's, it seems that Jacks' has suffered even greater damage — enough to turn him into a Fate — although the author remains unclear about the circumstances.

Stephanie Garber, 2021 - Flatiron Books - 1232 pages

How Far Would You Go for Happily Ever After?

This opening question alone on the back cover captures the main theme of the series and brings up several others: What is happiness? What is eternity? And most importantly, why would anyone want to confine the very essence of life — which is supposed to be an ever-changing flow — to a fixed, permanent state?

Jacks became immortal, though it is unclear how, in the wake of a romantic tragedy caused by a curse cast upon him. His heart has stopped beating, but he still has the power to affect the hearts of mortals. The curse that turned him into a Fate is not only emotional, it is ontological. It is worth noting that, from an occult perspective, the heart is the symbol of the inner core of the soul

It is a frequently recurring symbol in fairy tales. One example is Snow White, whose heart the hunter, sent by the Evil Queen, is tasked with retrieving. The heart is part of the mechanism of entrapment. It is a vessel for memories and vital energy.

In this series, immortality is vampiric. It requires blood. There's even a blood-sucking tree: “Anyone clever enough to find the tree and brave enough to drink its blood will be human no more, but immortal”. This comes at the cost of sacrificing the person you love most. However, the end appears to justify the means. Even in fairy tales.

And given all the backstabbing, curses and other failed (or successful) murder attempts, the quest for immortality is anything but glorious and actually drives people mad. It entraps them in never-ending cycles and patterns in which the original wound is replayed over and over again. Even when memory is altered or fragmented, something always remains. Lifelines seem to keep repeating. Forgetting does not eliminate the wound: it simply obscures it.

Jacks Out of the Box

If the heart is regarded as a carrier of memories and vital energy, Jacks stands as a quintessential anomaly. He no longer possesses his own — at least not in the same way as everyone — and yet he exerts influence over other people's hearts. He does not merely convey a desire or an illusion: he reactivates wounds, expectations, and hidden legacies.

Jacks is undoubtedly one of Stephanie Garber's most compelling characters. He is somewhat akin, albeit darker and more complex, to Archibald in Christelle Dabos' The Mirror Visitor series.

What makes him so intriguing is that his apparent cruelty is not gratuitous, unlike what his behaviour in Caraval seemed to suggest. It stems from a more ancient mechanism. He is not only ambiguous, he is the product of a system that transforms wounds into functions. The archetype of the tempter linked to the forbidden fruit — the iconic red-juiced white apples, which he eats in all circumstances.

He is not just a tragic seducer. He is the fulcrum of a memory that transcends individuals. His apparent nonchalance is more of an armour than a sign of indifference. When you are doomed to outlive those you love, attachment becomes a liability. For an immortal, to love a mortal is to accept that you will lose every time. 

Jacks does not play with hearts out of cruelty. He shields himself from a world where every promise has an expiry date. While trying to avoid getting hurt, he ends up hurting others. And that is undoubtedly the real curse: the one that dooms him to kill any woman he kisses if she is not his true love.

“Every Story Has the Potential for Infinite Endings”

This raises an important question: do the characters in this series really choose their actions, or are they simply replaying predetermined storylines?

Amidst curses, prophecies and spells of secrecy – which prevent them from telling the truth – speech itself seems to be under control.

The Valors, the first royal family of the Magnificent North, had constructed the arch as a passageway to a place called the Valory. No one knew what the Valory contained, since the stories of the North couldn’t be fully trusted, thanks to the story curse that had been placed on them. Some tales couldn’t be written down without bursting into flames, others couldn’t leave the North, and many changed every time they were told, becoming less reliable with every retelling. In the case of the Valory, there were two conflicting accounts. 

The tales of the North catch fire, become distorted and inconsistent, and ultimately shape reality. History is no longer a reliable reference point: it is instrumentalised.

Whereas Caraval celebrated the illusion as spectacle, Once Upon a Broken Heart offers a glimpse into what goes on behind the scenes.

The warm, theatrical atmosphere of Valora in the South gives way to the colder and harsher setting of the Far North. The arches hold more than just wonder: they open the way to power struggles, coveted magical artefacts, negotiated alliances, and rumours spreading faster than the actual truth.

The media shape reputations, fabricate scapegoats, and pass judgment based on hearsay. Magic turns to strategy.

In this deceptively enchanting world, full of contradictory tales, alternate timelines, amnesia, artefacts, and mythical creatures, where certain truths cannot be spoken, Evangeline finally stops blindly believing the stories she is told. She learns to discern, to observe, to connect the dots rather than surrender to them.

Following on from Caraval, which presented illusion as entertainment, this series explores the reverse side of storytelling: its capacity to manipulate as well as expose. Stories may deceive, conceal, and influence perceptions — but they may also be a source of empowerment. It all depends on who is telling them, and who chooses to believe them.

Beyond the balls, curses and oaths of eternal love, the series questions the power of the narratives that shape our perceptions. Admittedly, it remains a romantasy aimed at a young adult audience, where gloom is tempered by enchantment. But beneath the glittering veneer lies a more troubling question: do the stories we tell ourselves construct our reality, or do they merely distort it?

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Easter: The Shock of the Real

⚡⚡⚡ The concepts presented in this video are used with the express permission of Iso V. Sinclair.

Easter is a celebration tied to paedophilia, where we do not consume the body of ‘Christ’, but rather that of a vampiric entity that penetrates the individual.

Jesus represents each individual’s planetary memory. 

At Christmas, this memory takes the form of a child, embodying the Soul’s innocence and naivety. 

It is then sacrificed at Easter, symbolically marking its death (return to the astral plane), before re-entering the cycle of reincarnation to continue energy exploitation. 

This is a condensed version of a fact well known among higher occult lodges.

Original text by ISO V. SINCLAIR translated from French by EY@EL
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Am I the Matrix?

The matrix is not a place. It is not an external conspiracy. It is not a system imposed by some alien force.

The matrix is where consciousness abdicates. It begins the day we surrender our inner sovereignty for comfort, security, identity, or the promise of meaningfulness.

It sets in when we choose to react rather than see. When we mistake dreams for life. When we hand over our responsibility to a framework, a narrative, an authority.

But its most subtle lock lies elsewhere. The matrix seals itself when we believe that thoughts are our own. When we no longer see that thought is a stream, a programme, a conditioned response to an environment, and not an origin.

As long as thought is mistaken for identity, freedom remains pure theory. For one cannot leave a prison if they believe themselves to be its gatekeeper.

The matrix does not need walls. It runs on compliance. On silent consent. On habit. It does not compel: it makes us believe.

And the day consciousness ceases to identify with what it thinks, what it feels, what it believes itself to be... the matrix does not collapse. It simply ceases to be.

For what held the system together was neither power, nor fear, nor structure. It was forgetfulness.

Original text by ÉLÉHA translated from French by EY@EL
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