With every major bestseller comes a host of copycats, eagerly welcomed by publishers to keep the presses running whilst the hype lasts. Especially when Hollywood jumps on the trend. So, after the plethora of wizards and vampires spawned by the Harry Potter and Twilight phenomena, the hype has now shifted to fast-read domestic thrillers—inspired by Freida McFadden’s international bestseller The Housemaid (also a major feature film)—stepping into the breach she opened up.
The sincerest form of flattery is imitation, right?
Count My Lies, Sophie Stava (2025)
If only it added some additional value to the blueprint; a touch of originality to the tropes; and a dash of substance to the archetypes. It would be too much to expect, as fast reading obviously implies quick writing. At least based on the five thrillers I’ve recently wolfed down—I know, I just couldn’t help myself.
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Guidelines
Imagine a ready-made template for novels, like the visual templates provided by some graphic design platforms online. All you would need to do is fill in the placeholders using a list of preset tropes: motifs, recurring themes, typical situations, relationship dynamics, character archetypes, plot structures, narrative techniques, storytelling conventions, and so on… And there you have it—a bestseller that you may even turn into a series (just like The Housemaid and The Perfect Marriage) to double the jackpot and keep topping the bestseller list of the Amazon jungle, for as long as BookTokers are on your side.
1. Book Presentation
Pick a title that's simple, short and archetypal, along with a somewhat clickbait-y tagline.
- The Housemaid: "From behind closed doors, she sees everything." (Freida McFadden, 2022)
- Count My Lies: "I'm your friend. But can you trust me?" (Sophie Stava, 2025)
- The Waitress: "I was watching him. But he was watching me." (K.L. Slater, 2024)
- The Perfect Marriage: "His mistress is dead. His wife is his only hope." (Jeneva Rose, 2020)
- The Perfect Divorce: "Till death do us apart. Yours. Not mine." (Jeneva Rose, 2025)
- One of Us Is Dead: "Sublimely bitchy." (Jeneva Rose, 2023)
Go for a simple, symbolic front cover design featuring a keyhole, a styrofoam cup, wedding rings, a comb and a pair of scissors… but keep the colour scheme to no more than two or three different shades.
2. Style
Preferably write in the present tense, in the first person, and alternate characters’ points of view.
Although the basic idea is not a bad thing, it does have a few pitfalls when the murderer takes part in the storytelling and certain details that might give away the final twist need to be left out. However, authors tend to focus too much on throwing red herrings while failing to provide genuine clues or subtle psychological details as well. As a result, attentive readers, who could not possibly have seen this coming (unless they figured out the underlying mechanics), invariably feel betrayed by the far-fetched deus ex machina twist in the final act. That's the fly in the ointment.
Oddly enough, in The Waitress, only the lead character speaks in the first person. Which breaks the natural flow of the storytelling. This is even more noticeable in the audio version, where all three points of view are read by the same voice actress unlike in other similar audiobooks with multiple points of view.
Use short sentences, as you would in a screenplay or dialogue prompt. Avoid metaphors, semantic fields, and overly literary phrasing as your target audience might otherwise lose interest. What’s more, it will be all the easier to adapt for film or television.
Incidentally, a TV series is in the pipeline for Count My Lies. And The Perfect Marriage is currently being adapted for the silver screen.
3. Characters
Your lead characters must be in the same age group as your target audience, namely firmly in their thirties. Not too young, as many tropes common to the genre—such as marriage, property, careers, complicated divorces and established neighbourhoods—wouldn’t work; nor too old, for the main characteristic of ‘youth culture’ primarily involves trapping people’s minds in illusory bubbles of timelessness, which are ultimately bound to eventually burst.
Readers should be able to relate and think: “This could be me”. Turning everyday life into a source of anxiety is the very principle of domestic thrillers.
First, it was the smell, the dead giveaway of the Chanel No.5, so classic, so expected. This is matched with the monochrome outfit adorning her well-maintained figure. Not a shred of personality in her outward appearance, which itself tells you everything you need to know about her. Her features are hard and are kept in place by routine visits to a plastic surgeon, but the kind who does a superb enough job that only a well-trained eye can even tell that the skin isn’t 100 percent natural. The entire entrance is punctuated by the final click of a black Manolo Blahnik heel (never Louboutin’s, “red is ostentatious”), announcing that she is here and ready for her proper allotment of attention, which by normal tally is all of it.
The Perfect Marriage, Jeneva Rose (2020)
Inject a touch of glamour with a strong emphasis on luxury and good looks, which are more important than character depth. Don’t hold back on glitz and glam, and don’t forget to remind readers just how incredibly hot husbands or lovers are. Lust makes up for loss, and it's important for the narcissistic mindset to hear that often.
Be sure to overdo on stereotypes: negligent cops who aren’t exactly bright; sloppy coroners who’ve never heard of such a thing as DNA; abnormally well-behaved, docile kids who do exactly as they’re told at all times…
4. Final Tips
When you tell the truth—at least, if the truth is boring, which it almost always is—people begin to fidget, their eyes glazing as their attention wanes. Eventually, they realize, snapping to with a sheepish Oh, I’m sorry, what were you saying?, trying to feign interest.
Count My Lies, Sophie Stava (2025)
Once all the ingredients have been added, spread them out in the mould and give it a final twist at the end of the cooking process. If the mix is too thick, dilute it with irrelevant trivial details.
Also, do not hesitate to retell the same events from the other characters’ perspectives. It creates the impression that there are hidden clues, while saving you the trouble of having to plant any real ones.
Ethics Go Rat-a-Tat
The bully forgets they’re a bully. The victim never does.
One of Us Is Dead, Jeneva Rose (2023)
As I pointed out in a previous article on Freida McFadden, “the most disturbing aspect is undoubtedly the moral ambiguity of all her characters, which tends to normalise borderline personality disorder and manipulation as the standard way of relating to others.” And the everyone’s-a-psychopath or borderline trope comes up consistently, to varying degrees, in all the books mentioned above. This is particularly true of Jeneva Rose, who seems to take perverse delight in allowing the triumph of deviant ethics with total impunity.
You certainly do not want to show manipulators and psychopaths in a bad light. After all, we ought to help shift the Overton window in favour of a completely dehumanised, predatory society governed by Ahrimanic Intelligence, just as Rudolf Steiner prophesied. Some like to call it ‘alternative’, but what kind of alternative are we actually talking about?
The liar, the cheat who tried to ruin my life. It's all over for him. For me, it's only just beginning.
The Waitress, K.L. Slater (2024)
Fundamentally, the reason these kinds of books are so popular is mainly because our souls get bored with the numbing routine of everyday life and long to experience the thrill of danger and the unexpected—without any consequences.
When we're saturated with information, we no longer have the desire to engage in deep thought, because everything brings us back to this distressing world. So we find comfort in the tales we tell ourselves, and these stories tell us in turn. Ultimately, vicarious fear allows us to gain perspective on our concerns and defuse our own fears.
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